critique my form please.

[JENX!!!]

tell me what i'm NOT doing right... or what I need to be doing. THANKS!!!

[Adiggity]

Actually the 2nd one doesn't look bad. The first one is hard to tell but I would say you need to get yourself off of the bike more and keep your head down. (good reference is to have your head where your mirror should be. But like I said, I've definitely seen worse. Just need more seat time now.  Better up your credit card limit. 

[Justin]

i've been told that my low side elbow should be pointing down to the earth. That is how I check if I am low enough.  I love the pictures. . .Looking GOOD!

[mase]

I don't race, but I would say loosen up your shoulders.  You look tight.

[Rand]

Your legs are too short 

[JENX!!!]

THANKS FOR ALL THE ADVICE!!!! ....picture update....oct 5 td.

[mase]

Nice.  Those look good.

[Adiggity]

THANKS FOR ALL THE ADVICE!!!! ....picture update....oct 5 td.

Like I said, all you need is more track time!! Looking good man! 

[Team Gorgonzola]

I doo agree, but still those legs are too short. I have the same problem

[AFM937]

Foot position looks good. Work on the head turn. Lead with the shoulder and slide back on the seat a bit. AFM937

[knucklehead]

It looks like you're having fun to me!!! How do you feel? Comfortable? That's all that really matters. Everyone's style is unique to themselves, what matters is the feeling that you are one with the bike and not fighting against it. Cheers!